Swires

well its short and nice actually. I enjoyed it immensly even if it only took me 5 seconds to read it. Although I found it quite random, how is sorrow ...

David’s Lament The soldiers massacred, leaders have fallen, Do not speak about our loss, Do not make the foe rejoice. May Gilboa’s land be always wasted, For good soldiers have ...

Anyone else, This is the thrid poem I've written so feel free to rip it to shreds.

And pulled the knife out of her chest, >> It would read better as And pulled the knife from her chest >>It just breaks up the difficult flow of that ...

1. Eragon or Harry (as heroes)? Harry Potter 2. Galbatorix or Lord Voldemort (as villains)? Voldy, Galbatorix has no real aims and is a mere overtone of the books as ...

A young boy threw a stone at the creature’s head and It began to cry, a long and mournful howl like a lone wolf. Can something cry a howl? It ...

lol, I was just joking which no one would have picked up on as I didn't include a "lol". Take the idea BUT, if you ever publish just remember where ...

SpeedDemon, welcome to the site however your crit was of minimal value. If you like a piece you must say why in terms of flow, characters, plot, world building and ...

OK, but you cant publish it because its my idea and I have evidence that it is because of this forum so if it ever hits the shelves I can ...

OK, Its no use us giving you a story line. I can think of a thousand story lines and apply them to romance however many may not be very good ...

Welcome to the site. I didnt know that all girl schools had that stigma attached to them??? Im confused. We have another Brit on our hands Jack, all hell will ...

Thankyou myth. I think Ill write the beginning then the end and then do the middle.

Well I usually write 20K in chronological order, get boeard and toss it to one side. I have done this with many ideas. Its mainly because I dont know where ...

Yes, I thought that after I posted. It might be worth writing the last 10 thousand words and the first then do the middle. I hate middles with a passion.

Why share? If people are too lazy to work for what they have then they must die. ~Judge of Blesser town. what I have i share in return for more ...