Swires

Sorry, I misread "rhythm" for rhyme. And the poem seemed vague to me - but thats my opinion.

Rows 1 and 2 are my favourites, they are quite nice yes.

Seamus Heaney is a poet that I like and especially Mid-Term break.

Ill be different and give a short answer: Yes. A Poem does have to have meaning. A nonsense poem also has meaning - The Jabberwocky makes perfect sense because of ...

A little random for my liking. However I did like the structure of it. The last verse was a tad cheesy for my liking :)

Mmm.. Im going to be the devils advocate - I didnt like it. To me the second verse did not make sense at all. I don't understand why Pathetic Fallacy ...

I dont know what this was trying to be, it looks more like prose yet reads like bull to be honest. Im not sure where this should go. Perhaps you ...

Yes it seemed a little unflowing for a limerick. A limerick should flow perfectly and add to the humour. I didn't like the concept of it at all because it ...

inspiration marinates this land in a thin glaze of honey wine and the nectar of old gods; across the fresh Aegean blue, heroes from the distant past are calling, thrumming ...

You go through life easily, As gracefully as a swan, Never doubting in good fortune, Which never ceases to come With the grace of a swan -- sounds better as ...

Your first effort was a good try. Try using some rhyming words.Try to put some rythme into ur makes ur poem sound good. I liked the way the poem ended. ...

I also disagree with Chandi, I liked the "all" in there as well. I liked this poem and the meaning it had and it was a pleasant read.

The purple in the first one is...very beautiful, its a nice capture of nature :-D It's impressive you got those bugs to be so still, ha ha ha. And, the ...

Nice tips, you could apply the same techniques to fantastical creatures - like different types of dragons etc... and how they evolved differently to each other. For example Dragon species ...

" Thank you very much for taking your time and reading this. I'm open to suggestions, but please have mercy with the critics" - Why? How on earth can you ...