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It was pretty disturbing in places, its not over-the-top scary but its scary enough.

Yes, my mum thinks Thomas Harris is derranged because he writes Hannibal so well - I say to her that "nothing is impossible with a little imagination and a gift ...

Thank you DS. Anyone else any points to make? Some questions I have for readers: 1) The character of Sandly Limerick - endearing? Do you as a reader enjoy reading ...

Hi Wilde Charlie - Capital letters in poetry are not essential, I chose to remove most punctuation and capital letters for a thematic purpose - the commonness of nature and ...

I'm actually not a fan of the style at all. I think in modern fantasy novels you really need to zoom in with your characters. Even in worlds of magic ...

20 or so steps? Any chances you are running an Apache server based off your own computer? YWS is far too big and active for a home run server to ...

Stephen King's work is potent with curse words and expletives and I feel it adds to the realism of many of his characters. Its because although his stories are third ...

Ive read the first one - boring really, I forced my way through it. It was just a string of non-connected events and the main character wasn't likable. Not a ...

Great book, if a little saggy in places. Momentum was good with a cross section of Fantastical Horror. Basically its about a woman named Rose who leaves her abusive (and ...

I have two views of rats. I used to have them as pets also - they are an intelligant, loving creature (much better than a hamster or gerbil). However the ...

Yes, very funny. Fantastic-Comedy is a very hard genre, you seem to parody it well in the extracts shown. I'd like to see a longer chronological extract. Its very difficult ...

Fangs dug into the space between my shoulder and neck earning a scream from me. A sharp pain shot down my body from the force of it. I felt trails ...

Thank you for the comments hunter111. I agree with all of them and I'll work on changing them in the redraft.

[s]Her voice is harsh as she speaks, and it jolts me back to attention. I look up.[/s] Her harsh voice jolts me back to attention. Or something similar "Yes?" Harrumph. ...

I bathed in the sea, the rippling surface settling to my waist. Dancing in circles was the wind, touching skin and hair with its cold tendrils. I crossed my arms ...