Swires

Well I am a titan so I have many hands to need. lol. Welcome, remember, wisdom is in critiquing other's work.

Please post text version. I know you have but this is just cluttering the forums. Id only use attachments when you havea really long piece of work (say 20k+) that ...

Sometimes I wish I was Griffin or Imp so my sole duty would be to space peoples work out. Thats what i would do with my life. :) This was ...

Stop it. Write something, you'll get better. Did you stop because of my critique? Come on, it wasn't that bad. It really wasn't. If you are trying my consience, then ...

I have sent the user a PM explaining about YWS crits and how he can get better at writing earlier today.

Thank you both for your comments. At this point I am reading about Scall. I haven’t read anything of yours earlier, so I don’t know if you described the demon ...

Not in the conventional sense of the term ;). Random thought: it'd be quite cool if the bones could be filled with not air, but a gas that is less ...

Yes, thats what I thought. But is anything other than a vacuum truly hollow?

Who remembers the name of the leader during the Rwandan genocide? Or the Pakistani leader who organised the killings of over a million Bangaladeshis? Not everyone is remembered; probably very ...

Quibbon - You just need to click emoticons, you not need to drag them into the text. Flemzo - I see now, perhaps I missed the implicitly.

Part 3 Added of Derrens Story. In addition to a normal critique I want feedback and suggestions about "the game of bones" - do you understand it from the way ...

Ok, I can see what you are going for. but, personally I didnt feel for the girl at all, for some reason the story lacked emotion. I think it was ...

First off, I absolutely love the story you are telling. I enjoy tales of magic and this is another one of those tales that I adore. It is simple to ...

Cadium - During Saddams life there was always hope to his supporters that he may return. His death has stopped that hope in Iraq. I believe injection, privately and filmed ...

Who can submit to Squills?