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Hi there, feel free to PM me with any problems or questions.

lol - strange what people do isnt it?

Hi there, Im Adam. Post a few reviews on others work and you will get more on your own - Just a friendly reminder.

I really like the eye.

.lol - great stuff.

The first one.

You are telling us everything. We need to be 'shown' the story. Example: On his first day at work, Jonny Celtric, age 25, spilled coffee on his boss. This is ...

What use is this? THis is a forum to review and work on Fantasy Fiction, not read blurbs. Write the thing first before posting please.

First of all I notice the date - interesting, its not often we get fantasys in the future. Drace spun, assault rifle raised, to face the charging demon. I think ...

I suppose it is very Disney like and overused.

I dont follow my heart at all. Im not one of these romantics that everybody talks about because they are stupidly in love with a loser that is cheating on ...

Yes - But not in a way that has not been over used. if you find it is out of character for him to die then allow him to live. ...

I see no real reason for this to be in present tense. Present tense is usually written in to portray immeadiacy, alert or other literary ploy. THis is a story, ...

Mr- Mister Mr - Master Mrs - Missus Ms - Miss/Missus Messrs - is the plural form of both Mr. and Monsieur. ie. Mister Mooney BUT Messrs. Mooney wormtail padfoot ...

Ooo - Nice site. Ive submitted a piece to an unpaid mag. I doubt it will get accepted though.