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Maybe a tad too passive, not hitting enough. Although there is an element of intrigue. Space, Time and Nuclear War

HI there, feel free to PM me with any questions or problems. Also, just a quick reminder - you may want to review a few pieces of work before you ...

Yeah - lots of poems. Also I didn't find the last line all that powerful.

Its very beautiful - I loved the last line. but as Claudette has mentioned before, maybe a tad vague.

Lyrics Section. On the song: A little cliche and a little vague. There doesnt seem to be a solid entity on what the lyrics are about???

I like it!

Ok, Ive gone through and cleaned up some corrections- this is fairly minimalistic, comments are welcomed as are in depth crits. Ill have anything really - Its my first scifi ...

I have PMed the member about poor comments n stories. Now for my own comments: Well fishr wrote a piece on the piece lol. My advice will probably be a ...

I see chapters as just a natural way to end a certain part of the story. I like to think of Chapters basically just for reading practicality but some people ...

cool story Why is it cool, what did you like about it. Give some details to the writer so he can perfect what he is a good at and improve ...

Thanks for the encouragement everyone. 15k reached. YAY.

Gandalf is a likable Hero, I admit. He ranks high on the likability list.

Thankyou for all the praise. Not to nitpick, but I didn't praise, I constructivley critiqued. If we are nitpicking - il join in. I may not have been talking about ...

Congratulations, we are getting quite a population of Admins.

Congrats on the poetry! :)