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When you explain it all clicks, however if this was clearer then the poem would be much better. I love it even more now I know its about tatoos. Well ...

Well the dark depressing content was complimented with the jolly, rhyming meter. The two didnt go together well and contradicted each other... I also didnt feel power if their was ...

Derren uses both to kill animals after many many attempts at sneaking up on them. He eats the meat cold with his bare hands, then he would leave trails of ...

"Open spaces, ive been locked up for too long" - Derren. If you were a software program, what would it be? I.e Word, Excel ...

Writers block isnt an illness. Something causes it. It could be a number of things: 1) Your story has dried up 2) Your characters have dried up 3) You dont ...

Well publishing is publishing - Well done anyway.

Some interesting stuff you have there, I really need to start reading some of your work Crysi.

Bookstore. I like to own a book more than borrowing one.

Hey there, welcome to YWS - its a fantastic Place for writers of any kind! If you have any problems, just PM me.

Hey there, welcome to YWS - its a fantastic Place for writers of any kind! If you have any problems, just PM me.

Thanks for the comments.

Ok, thanks Snoink for your in depth critique. I agree with all your points.

What do you think Big Brother are for? They are the pole-dancers. (Joke, a sick sick joke)

Over one thousand years ago four of the greatest Witches and Wizards of the age put their qualities together to form a school of magic so all could learn the ...

The King's Painting: A snake, bitter, in his right hand, A dagger in the other. His mouth is burdened with a black heart. This heart, beats, pulses and darkens the ...