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Ok, tabris and myself excluded - this is a poor show of critiques. Come on guys, why were you confused? What did you like, what didnt you like? Your comments ...

Actually your question is rather ambigous, because the more your write and concentrate on writing you are technically also aging as you do that. I agree with a few others: ...

The beginning - I neither liked nor disliked to be honest. However "had had" is awkward. Perhaps, "drank with dinner" ? However, you do seem to blab on about the ...

Nice, I remember reading some of your other stuff. A few things # You use speech tags too often. Dont be afraid of "said" - said is your best friend. ...

As he inhaled the bitter-sweet air only smelt while sailing atop the beautiful blue ocean, Roger Greenfield knew he was one with the sea. He belonged on the S.S. Marie-anne ...

I'm going to second Tim - not really a brilliant poem, I wasn't captivated by it. The topic was vague like the majority of poem and it didn't quite "work"

Fantasy Fiction and Science Fiction respectively in the order that gyr mentioned. You are a great writer - churn out a story and get something published. I really believe you ...

I loooove NaNoWriMo!! (Didn't finish this year though.. *pout* But hey, I got 18000 words. More than I've written before) And the dare thread just totally rocked. My dare: Write ...

A tad boring, the subject matter didnt interest me really and it was just a list of "I did this..." Also poems that and in a question dont do it ...

Snoink I disagree, math is not creative, it is inputting values into predefined functions in order to find values of x, y etc... Math has been done over and over ...

Havnt read, but sound intriguing.

Ok - where is the 70% from, Brad thing is if we cant understand what its about I dont think the poem works.

Good article. I certainly learned a few things.

Nice tip. echo $claudette;

do a one liner then a paragraph. Ive tried to give an example but I cant.