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Yeah, Im with TBR, I dont really get the piece.

What an improvement! :D Evil Armadda(SP?) 2 is much better written than the first. Youve slowed the pace slightly which is good. A few points: 1) Instead of saying "The ...

Thanks snoink, you have some great points, its true, the man seems a bit like a cardboard cut out lol. I arnt sure what yuu mean by the prologue, you ...

right......GOD SAVE OUR GRACIOUS QUEEN. Sorry lol. Yes I am patriotic about our unique identity as English People with in the British Isles.

Thats the answer I was looking for , thanks Twighlight. The time period isnt been given away until the second chapter. I was thinking the main story line could be ...

LOL! I meant as in history, ie Medieval etc.... Sorry I am tired and my words are coming uto rwong LOL!

Well you could say that. His entire pupose is really to symbolise death and murder, or at least what I hope he symbolises. You could say he is grim-reaper like, ...

Thanks torpid. Anyone else, I need some ideas for a better title for it as well. I am really getting ideas for this and may use it to start the ...

5) Hrry Potter...the first 4 books. Although the last two are ok if I'm in the right mood. Rowling isn't a writer, she's a story teller, and not a very ...

I say there is need for a song..... Land of Hope and Glory Mother of the Free How shall we extol thee Who are born of thee? Wider still and ...

I can write short stories no problem. Novels are a different matter, I tried to write one some time ago and it just ran out of stea half way through ...

Well Ive been reading all your chapters of the story and I have to say its coming along swimmingly well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and its very abstract. I ...

When I post I give reviews, general comments and a few suggestions to make the story better. Snoink gives a critique in which he analyses everything in order to make ...

Nice story some good description. Nice, powerful ending. My only crit is that there were maybe a few cliches in there: Glistening mountains of crystal It just seems to be ...

Some writers prefer the pen though because it allows them a few more seconds to select the right words and descriptions before they right, CHris Paolini (Author of Eragon, Eldest) ...