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iLL BE IN THE USERGROUP

LOL! Yeah with the whole swords crossing over a ball of magic thing. I take your point though,I havnt reinforced that point enough.

Yes alot better

UNfortuneatley no, you see all magic users are poor. The Machambre crest(rulers of the terriotory) are wealthy nad opposed to magic, they have forced magic users into hiding under the ...

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LOL! Funny stuff.

Harry potter wins hands down.

Quick Idea: Mutants form a cult when they realise they arnt the only freaks in tht universe, they realise that this is an oportunity, no a gift to bring a ...

I arnt causing trouble or anythign but what is the point of that post, there isnt really need for it, just comment when you DO have time. Sorry I just ...

Foxes are a wild animal, they cant possibley as a whole be domesticated. It is a little silly comparing the two

Thanks Fontroy, more reviews welcome.

Sorry guys not an action chapter of the boatman, more of a transitional chapter, I arnt sure whether I like the first scene but oh well. Chapter 4 is a ...

If the clothing is important I say keep it in one block or you could hint to what he is wearing throughout a scene. Yes, I have a clear picture ...

I enjoyed it. ...though I also was looking forward to hearing more. But I rather liked the dream idea; it might have been slightly abrupt. yes I think that coild ...

LOL!, Tut tut jigsaw you naughty person. I tend not to correct spelling because I'm a culprit for bad spelling as well through typos and it annoys me when all ...