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I liked it, although Ive noticed your glossary which I arnt a fan of, Ive never liked a glossary really, I like everything explained through speech, but I guess something ...

I should've known it was Daffy Duck all along. Those black eyes, pinholes in a blanket of white; the black coat, a symbol of darkness and a shining bill, the ...

Chapter 4 Isabel peered out of a thin crack through the curtains of her golden carrier. IT was night. The fountains in the palace gardens trickled bead’s of pristine water ...

Its got to be JK Rowling, the plot shes weaved is genius

But in the end no matter how well written they are they cant possibley know about the canon characters as much as the real author, no the world they are ...

I still think fanfictions are unoriginal and have yet to read a good one yet, they simply dont compare with the original no matter how good the writer is. We'll ...

Im not a big fanfic fan, mainly because it detracts from the original story because the writer will never do it in the novelists style. I also think that it ...

I found this ok, but some of teh workding and how you have phrased thing seems a little copmplex and confusing. I cant place my finger on a phrase, it ...

Those who have read the boatman will know it starts out as a first person story, of someone who gets killed. I was wondering if I could have several scenes ...

ditto. Observation, write about those who know, what mannerisms do they have? is this apparant in most men? Whats there voice like? etc...

Nice story, I like the last line and it makes me want to carry on reading, the grammar is a little messy for example on the last line you missed ...

[pre]This was very good, you used good dramatic timing. For example, the one word paragraph "Poison." That alone actually drew me in to continue reading. Some things were a little ...

I liked this apart from the ending, it seems a little cliched to me.

Good, interesting and I want to find out more.

"I like to hide behind corners and throw pebbles at the nobles as they walk past, I used to do it with Verole before he died" WHat sports do you ...