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I loved the film and I think that the piece above is also very good, I particular like how you describe Elijahs emotions etc...

That a good story, nothing much happened but it sucked me in straight away and makes me want too see that CSI epidsoe. Do more of this or another CSI ...

LOL! This was quite humorous

Nice HP Fanfic, this is what a proper fanfic should look like, not the half-baked rubbish scattered around.

Nice tip, and I agree that Sauron was a terrible evil character. But then again wasnt Saruman that main evil charcter throughout LOTR?

I have enojoyed reading this story throughout and I can see a progression in your ability to write.

Yes this was an interesting read, I agree with what the above reviewer have said, in stead of saying "I did" "I stood" et... experiment with present participles ie. "Running ...

Yeah it does seem rather random, you need to be "taking the mickey" out of something for it to be "wittiful "

LOL! Nice parable, nice moral as well.

Nice story torpid, I think the above reviews have covered everything. I like it how you write many genres, and a pretty good at them all.

I also feel the plainness of the first part, also I felt that "inhabitants" was repeated too much. The rest seemed good and I think you achieved your goals well.

Yes, well done and well written, intrigueing and I agree with Jig, I liked the ending too. If I am to critiscise anything I would the beginning, It was good ...

I thoiyght both pieces were good, in the first one I arnt sure about the extensive use of elipses(sp?)

I like this piece, I love how you open it up and it just pulled me into to read on. It is an interesting "story telling" type style you have ...

Please space out the text and I shall return