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Yes, I can see where you are coming from with this Snoink, I tend to go into explain mode when im doing a world building scene.

Really nice article, it will be helpful when I come to crit.

Hi guys, the dancing rat is back, thats right Me IS BACK ON THE BEST SITE EVER. Im so glad that YWS is back in town as I lost interest ...

goodbye! I shall miss YWS and how much it has helped my writing.

Thankyou, yes this was rushed a little because I needed to get a feel of where the story was going. This thing probably wont even go into the actual thing.

Sorry for the delay but I have been on holiday, thanks for the critique.

Its based in a fantasy world.

I really enjoyed this it was one of the few I read to the end. I love the imagery at the start and how you create mystery around the boy. ...

I love making up my own currencies.

yes imps version sounds good.

Thanks. Looks like the Mauve Eye will be my next project then, I need to slow down the beginnning a little though

A rat, no a DANCING rat.

They dont seem common at all. I didn't know ypu read Mauve Eye Imp?

I arnt a fan of myspace purely because I would sooner create my own website, good,clean code. MySpace just isnt original and I couldnt care less about joining it.

I have just started a witchhunter story and after doing some research there doesnt seem to be alot of witch hunter stories outthere. does the idea sound original?