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Sweetyb1

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bring Me To My Home *tweaked*

    Dang, that was really, really, beautiful. This is a great poem and well really I'm not sure there's much that needs fixing. I really loved the dining on music, listening ...

    Nov 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Job of the Living

    Wow thanks guys! I'm so glad you liked it ! I was a little unsure about this piece since I'd never tried writing anything like this before, especially since I've ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Job of the Living

    When I was little I held firm belief in three things. Everything was subject to change, except these three things: One: Cheerios were the greatest snack ever invented Two: Nothing ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A Place to Belong part 4

    Well you already I know I like it, but here's some extra advice for you my friend! First off, incorporating songs into a piece is something I really enjoy, but ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: The Secret Short Death of Mr. Everdeen

    Hey, I really like this idea. I love the series, and I have always wished there were more details about Katniss' father. He seems like such a good guy and ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Reflection: Chapter 1

    Well don't have much to say just hope you like it. I really want this to be something I go all the way with so please any tiny thing you ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Life and Times of Your Friendly Neighborhood Maniac!

    Yay for band. It is fun. Favorite authors. That's a toughie. I don't really know if I can decide. I like to write Fantasy and Reality Fiction mostly. Those are ...

    Jun 20, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Life and Times of Your Friendly Neighborhood Maniac!

    Hi everyone I'm Rebecca, your friendly neighborhood maniac! :D I'm a 14 year old girl who lives in the southern United States! In Louisiana! And I don't have a southern ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: One day I met a Little Bird

    Very sweet poem. Your rhythm was great except I stumbled a little with the line: "And he gave me a happy chirp to assure me he was okay" But I ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

    Great job! I love the repetition in this! I did see one grammar mistake though, but it's just a quick edit. Your lines: "Speeches that, though dripping with dulcet richness, ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hullo everyone!

    Thanks you guys! Okay time to answer the questions! Favorite Genre to Read/Write: Fantasy Music: All kinds really. Except folk, trance, and classical music. Those are the three I really ...

    Jun 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hullo everyone!

    Hi there everybody! My name's Rebecca. You can call me that or by my username. Just please don't call me Becky. I beg of you :shock: Becca's alright though but ...

    Jun 19, 2009


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