Sweeney_Todd

Silly Sydstix is right, you have blocks of words. And you may want to double-check on the forms of words that you use, like "accept" and "except". 'To Accept' is ...

The name of this is ReAlLy interesting. How did you come up with this story? You may want to work on word usage, y'know, when you said "a man shuffling ...

kool. that was short, sweet, and to the point. It the guy she ran into---wha's his name?--Pierre? How do we know? The way the story flows is good, and her ...

:lol: haha, wow. That was...funny.omigah, he's GAY?! :oops: :smt005 this is one of those laugh till you cry kind of love stories/mistakes. i LOVE it!!!

NOOOOOO!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: Jason CAN"T die!!! And--And there was a ring in her purse and EVERYTHING!!! He was going to propose, wasn't he? :cry: :cry: :cry:

Anne followed Jack out of the tavern and down toward the docks, where The Discovery was moored, waiting. Once the immense Virginian was in view, Anne stopped dead in her ...

‘That was four years ago,’ Anne thought bitterly, ‘and the first--and only--time I’ve ever cried.’ This was true. Anne hardly ever cried, but when she did, she was alone where ...

:shock: omigosh! that.book.is.AWESOME!!!!! :D Eric's hot, too. :wink: But that book!!!!!! :D PLEASE pm me/lemme no wen u post the next part!!! :cry: *begging* it's so COOL!!! nice imagery and ...

Alicia Bonnie sat on the floor next to her thirteen-year-old daughter, teaching her the properties of Majik involving fire. The child tried to put the fire out once, and failed. ...

:oops: u are SO much braver than me! i think Yaoi and Yuri stories are awsome, but i don't have the guts to write them myself. but, anyway... Your writing ...