Sweeney_Todd

What band is that? Omigosh! It looked awsome! One of the pictures was a little blurry, but it was still cool. Lighting and smoke machines totally make the performance, don't ...

ooh...cute guy. It's *really* hard for me to draw guys, I usually make them too curvy and they look like girls, so I'm sad to say I'm a tad jealous. ...

*gasp* Cats are my Favorite!! I dunno the joke, but the cat is drawn really well, and you did a *very* nice job on the three-dimensional aspect of the room. ...

swans are AWSOME. Is the pig holding corn? It's a little blurry so it's kinda hard to tell. And you do NOT suck! 'I t'ain't no artist t'neither, hon-ay.' Don't ...

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha*gasp*hahahahahahahaha and I like the idea of a YWS radio, Lynlyn. you did forget the hair though. still kyoot (cute).

haha...funny. Previous Crits have a point though, kinda show-oriented. It's a bit hard to get it without watching the show, but still understandable.

That last Picture--the one you did of Raisin--kinda looks like Winry from Full Metal Alchemist...The Flying Pumpkin is my ultimate favorite though. Nice job of the detail work and explanations ...

Been there, done that. The story itself is--as you said--a little rough, but you can improve it easily. The first thing you need to focus on is the time period. ...

:shock: :!: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: OH. MY. GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! DARK STORYEZ IZ AWSUM!!!!!!!!!WOOT! That was AMAZING!!! Very suspensful, nice job on the grammar corrections

Her name is Yuna, she is over 7000 years old there should be a comma in 7,000. And this is WAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! too talkative. TALK about your major INFO dump!!!!

Want to come live in my world. I will make sure you’re never sad ever again.” There whould be a question mark in the first sentence. Good story though. Elves ...

omigosh!!! that was...wow. You're a really good writer, and the subtle references to Christ and the chance for hope really speak out for themselves. in short... THAT. WAS. AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DUDE!!!!!!!!! That's LOOOOONG!!!!!! looks kool though. i got it, and i'll read n critique it next chance i get. dunno wen that'll be, though.

omigosh!!!! wow. Why did you put spaces between the letters of some of the words? It's cool, just unusual. i read alot of poetry and have never seen that before. ...

That was amazingly sweet. The angel bit was an unexpected twist. But I thought Gabriel was a BOY angel. And why did Matthew not feel sad when Gabriel left? Did ...