SwallowedByInsanity

I liked this. Some lines were a little confusing, and I think that this line in particular... 20 minutes slowly pass feet pounding, steady beat constant, accurate two miles, ten ...

This piece is written in such a way that it is very open to interpretation. I think it's fantastic and really paints a picture in your mind, but I hesitate ...

This isn't as much in past tense as it should be, and the grammar is a little lacking... but the overall concept and idea was spot on. I'd be intrigued ...

I've actually written a few topics about being an atheist and why I chose to become one, and my main reasons consist of the same reasons you feel the need ...