SwallowedByInsanity

Wow. A very good portrayal of your idea with a poetic sort of flow to it. It's definitely got an eerie kind of sound to it and is sort of ...

I actually really found this quite interesting. The metaphor behind the entirety of the poem is truly something to behold. I have but one critique to make on this piece, ...

The second picture, although it may be just a rope knotted onto some kind of aircraft, the way you photographed is incredible. There are some real beauties here in your ...

I can see you watching me. Watching my lips move in the form of syllables smeared together as words. I spit them out all in a rush, but you’ve caught ...

Lovely. It flowed together like the words of a love song... and yes i know it twas not about love but still! It had the same sort of passion that ...

I like this mainly for the sole fact that you did not conform to the greedy chains of rhyming! I hate it when a poem looks forced and awkward, due ...

I really liked this poem. It seems like you just kind of poured out a little soul onto the page and bam there's a beautiful poem (: Certain parts were ...

I hate to say it but this could use a lot of improvements. 1. please do not use slashes marks '/' instead of hitting enter and starting a new line, ...

Although yes, it was posted in the wrong section, I still rather enjoyed this piece. She hadn’t shed a tear in years. It was because she’d run out of them. ...

My god, I think I'm in love with your work. Is that possible? I think so. haha everything I've ever read that you've written, (which might only be two pieces, ...

mother of god. one of the best damn things i've ever read on this site! i love your metaphors and poetic stature, you're writing style is clearly influenced and matches ...

the face might be off, but i still think it's quite a magnificent piece. keep at it!

Not my best piece... like, at all. It could use some work. But at the same time, I kinda liked the whole idea i had behind it, so i'd love ...

Incredible. I have no words to say how much I loved this poem! In fact, this has to be one of my favorites on here! Jeez, I have no critiquing ...

Wow, this was so pretty! I actually have absolutely nothing to critique on this (: You've just earned a like from me, which doesn't happen too often! Keep writing!