SwallowedByInsanity

Just as was said in the review above, the lighthearted aspect was an interesting choice, but it definitely did this poem justice. It was eerie and chilling and sent goosebumps ...

I can't even begin to tell you how impressive and poetic and unimaginably amazing this is. I would never in a million years have been creative or talented enough to ...

I really liked this, it really speaks from the heart. The only criticism I have is Are these the stars or your smile? this line in particular didn't really flow ...

A hard smack across the face sent me stumbling backwards against the wall. I shrieked out in shock and pain as my fingertips instinctively went to my cheek and grazed ...

I must say, I don't think there's a soul in the universe out there that can't relate to this poem. Wanting that one person that we cannot have. Your poem ...

Dear Boy, This is your toy doll speaking. Yes, you know the Barbie you tossed onto the shelf after a month because you grew bored of her? Hey there, that’s ...

This is kind of eerie in a way, almost chilling to read. Some of the lyrics are a bit morbid, but I actually enjoyed the song all the same. It's ...

Yes I agree with the person who commented before me about that confusion. But this poem is really beautifully written, it's almost like a song with the way it flows ...

I liked this. Some lines were a little confusing, and I think that this line in particular... 20 minutes slowly pass feet pounding, steady beat constant, accurate two miles, ten ...

I absolutely love shading, and I must say you did an incredible job on it. Your attention to detail in the bear was phenomenal and the hair on the man ...

You crawled into my mouth And became the only word to escape my lips. You overthrew my brain, And now control my thoughts. You slipped into my stomach And filled ...

This piece is written in such a way that it is very open to interpretation. I think it's fantastic and really paints a picture in your mind, but I hesitate ...

This isn't as much in past tense as it should be, and the grammar is a little lacking... but the overall concept and idea was spot on. I'd be intrigued ...

I've actually written a few topics about being an atheist and why I chose to become one, and my main reasons consist of the same reasons you feel the need ...