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Thanks again for reading Napal! Hmmm...now that I'm thinking about it, the nanny would have to show more of a reaction, like beg for her life or something. I'll go ...

Thanks so much for reading Napalmerski! You're not the first one to say that this reading reminded them of manga or anime. This is actually what I'm trying to go ...

You're welcome. I enjoy saving others from no-reviews land. :wink:

Thanks for reading Narniafreak! Daimin has multiple powers, but I plan to reveal them later on like you thought. Oh, and these people are the antagonists. I'll be sure to ...

Naina, that was an excellent read! You had me hooked from beginning to end. Bravo on the revision!!! Just one thing: It should be a period not a comma before ...

Hi Naina Chan! Welcome to YWS! Anyway, I liked it a lot, and PLEASE READ MY STORY!! COME ON! READ IT! :thud: Thank you and keep writing! :elephant: Pandacary 8) ...

Thanks Coco! I'm glad that you liked it! =^_^=

Thanks Narniafreak for the review! Hehe, I'll go back and fix those thoughts problems. I thought I italicized all the thoughts, but I guess I missed some. >_< Thanks again ...

Thanks for reading! Nope, I don't watch stargate. I wrote this in the middle of writing a paper. Took me ten minutes to write, which is why it needs some ...

Hey Rlw92! Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it. I'll be sure to tell you when I update this. :wink: Thanks for reading Young Gun!! Too bad it's not ...

Thanks Rach! I'm thinking about expanding it...we'll see! ^^

Thank you the Writers! Yeah, I'll be sure to fix up those weaknesses. I like your quote btw. It reminded me of the original Peter Pan written by J.M Barrie. ...

Thanks everyone for your input! I think I was a bit harsh Snoink so I'm sorry if I came out that way. I really appreciate all the suggestions and I'll ...

Oh wow, thanks for the compliment! :) I'll def try to improve this. It needs a lot of work! haha. Thanks for reading!

Hey Tadeusz, Hmmm, I see where you're going. I really don't elaborate too much. Maybe I can extend this a bit further to make it more complete. I def think ...