Suzuhara

*crosses fingers* I hope this version is better. :twisted:

December 10 ..................................... So far I like the simplicity of the character's tone. Makes me think that he's brainwashed, which gives off a creepy feeling. December 15 I had [s]to ...

Through the Kerr Hole Neal lay dispiritedly (sometimes you can replace adverbs with descriptions; so try showing this part) on the hard bed in his cell. There was simply no ...

Right now my book is yelling at me, telling me that I'm an idiot if I don't fix chapter one right now. *cowers and asks COT for forgiveness* I'm sorry!!!! ...

Thanks Jigs! I'm grateful for your comments. They're just what I needed! This an old piece that I wrote before I learned about not using "to be" and words like ...

I cut this in half so it would be easier to read. Please review! Thanks. I appreciate any feedback whatsoever. :^)

This needs work too. Oh well, It's good to keep learning! I'm never giving up. :^)

I come up with ideas when I wake up in the middle of the night or early in the morning. Or if I'm watching a really cool sci-fi film.

WOW :shock: , I didn't think I would get so many answers. Thanks for answering everyone. It was really fun reading your replies. Keep them coming. I know there are ...

Hey! I'm sure this question has already been asked somewhere, but I'm curious and I just wanted to know if you do anything weird while you write. I tend to ...

I like to read in my room between 1:00-3:00 am in the morning when everyone is asleep in the house. Seriously, it's the best time for me to read or ...

website: why: If it wasn't for this writing forum, my writing would have still been in the dumps. Not only did the website provide tons of information about writing, publishing, ...

T_T I have a lot of work to do with this one.

Wow, that is crazy. Maybe I'll try it. hehehe.

My life ever since I was twelve has been a great black hole (I think you should try rewording this sentence: Ever since I was twelve my life has been ...