Suzuhara

Hi there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: 1.) For best mates, Reggie and I argue a lot. If I like mint-chocolate-chip ice cream, she has to say that strawberry ...

Hi Naina Chan! Welcome to YWS! Anyway, I liked it a lot, and PLEASE READ MY STORY!! COME ON! READ IT! :thud: Thank you and keep writing! :elephant: Pandacary 8) ...

Hey there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: 1.) My mother holds my death sentence in her hands. [This is a nice hook for a first chapter because it makes ...

Thanks Coco! I'm glad that you liked it! =^_^=

Desperation brought her here. Noelle never compromised her morals for money, but she needed the cash. Badly. And the old lady living in the Victorian house across from her parked ...

Are you doing this description as part of a writing exercise to help you picture your character or are you planning on incorporating this into your prose? I'm asking because ...

Hey Jigs, Suzu here. This was a pleasant read because you've fashioned characters with personality and you've managed to put the reader right into their heads, letting us feel everything ...

Hi there, my name is Suzu. Here are my thoughts: Chapter One 1.) The soft grass underfoot, the smell of flowers and the warm, bright sun had always kept Desmond ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: Jackson 1.) A part of him was surprised when he had found himself outside again, out of the small white cell, away ...

Thanks Narniafreak for the review! Hehe, I'll go back and fix those thoughts problems. I thought I italicized all the thoughts, but I guess I missed some. >_< Thanks again ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu! Here are my thoughts: 1.) Shoot. The bell rings, and I have to be in Mr. Kyoski’s third period math class before the hall monitors hunt ...

Hi there, I'm Suzu. Here are my thoughts: 1.) The pounding of feet sounded through the night, following the light footfalls and quick breathing of their quarry. Their shouts filled ...

Mine are: New Divide, What I've done, Leave out all the Rest (Basically a lot of their newer stuff, lol) and of course, NUMB!

Hey Everyone, I'm Suzu and I'm posting an edited version of this chapter. Please tell me your thoughts from general impressions to anything that comes up. I appreciate all your ...

[Hi there, I'm Suzu! Here are my thoughts.] 1.) The streets were vacant and dark. The streetlamps had all been taken away, for no one walked down these roads anymore. ...