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I also couldn’t forget the revelation after a left the hospital, how I hadn’t given it any notice before—his pointed teeth. He had pointed teeth for real? I thought that ...

“Please, seek us out if you ever wanna talk,” This just doesn't sit well with me for some reason. But it's the only thing that I saw was wrong. =)

“About five from Walter’s coven, and then Randy and his group from the Wars,” Randy informed me. Shouldn't it be my instead of Randy since he's talking? She jolted as ...

I'm not going to make anymore comments. I'm just going to get right down to the reviewing from now on. Promise. Not found him yet? They haven't found him yet? ...

And now it's time, once again, for everyone's favorite game: LET'S REVIEW THE WRITER'S WORK! ...Okay. My humor is sucky. But I tried. :D A feral snarl ripped from his ...

Sorry for posting twice, but I forgot some. :? I circled the town a few times until I pinpointed my prey—a male around the age of forty-five, single, no attachments ...

We're just gonna cut to the chase. :) It was nice to feel the earth beneath one’s shoes, to breathe the pure air, to hear the crunch as we made ...

Hi. I thought this was good and kind of can't wait to read more. (I even voted. :wink:) Anyway, there were a few things I noticed: Thanks to me, he ...

Hey. This was great; just thought I'd say that again after all of the other times I said it. Haha. Anyway, there were a few things that I noticed. They're ...

Oh my. I'm actually crying. Ha. All of fits with real life - with the feelings, I mean. I can connect with this in so many ways. But what I ...

Wait, wait, wait, wait. Does Sophia have feelings for Carmen? Is that why she doesn't like the fact that he and Nora have a relationship? And what about Carmen for ...

I love this just as much as I loved the preface. It was amazing. But I do want to know more about Yamari and Sophia and Carmen's relationship. And what ...

This was amazing, and from what I saw, there wasn't a thing wrong with it. I loved this and now I'm craving for chapter one - which I'm so fixing ...

Hi. I'm Suzie and I'm going to review your work today. =) All of my corrections and comments will be in bold. Renee yawned, and rolled over. She had, surprisingly, ...

Okay, all I did was skim through because I'm in a bit of a hurry so I won't have any corrections or anything, but this was good and I'm so ...