SuzieCake

I enjoyed this. When I read the prologue, I thought it wasn't going to be very interesting, but as I read chapter one, I wondered to myself, "Gosh! What was ...

I enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did the last two, but I feel like there is something left out... It's missing a lot. And it's short. Are ...

I enjoyed reading this. A lot, I must say. Although, since I don't know much about the eighteenth century, I can't picture it with carriges and horses. It's all about ...

Hi, I'm SuzieCake and today, I'm reviewing your work. First off all, I would like to say that the story was amazing. The only thing you really need to work ...

The description in this chapter was better. I got a sense of what was going on. But I was really confused with her sudden change in attitude. How can someone ...

This was a little more interesting. I could actually get into this, but there still are a few things you're lacking. Emotion for one, descriptions for another. I can't get ...

Hi! I'm SuzieCake and my review is in the attachment below. =)

The only thing I can say is this was good. I enjoyed hearing more about Jack, and so far I'm liking him a lot. =) I can't wait for chapter ...

Okay, so...I think I said this in the attatchment, but I reread the story since I scanned the first time. Let me just say, I envy your writing. I really ...

CHAPTER TWO Brayden: The run was exhilarating as it always was. I loved the feel of the wind blowing through my fur. But I admit it was unnerving having a ...

I really just skimmed through this, so I didn't have time to look for errors, but this is good. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I ejoyed this, and I didn't see any errors. Please continue! I am anxious for the rest. :wink:

“Wow, your Coven sure has connections,” I mumbled, unable to stay standing any longer. This was too much information to take in at one moment. Taking a deep breath, I ...

So... I kind of got bored writing it the old way and everyone was saying that it had a Twilight theme to it, and I REALLY don't want that. So ...

The only thing I could do now was to go forward and hopefully get back into Philip’s good graces. Why wasn't she in Philip's good graces anymore?