SuzieCake

If I could, I would sing you a song, But I know I’d get it all wrong. I never could get my words perfect, Nor could I ever be so ...

I loved this. The whole time I read this, I was thinking of the many different times I'd been placed in this kind of situation. Maybe not the same setting, ...

Before I let you read the chapter, I just want everyone to know that I used to have this thing posted all over this site once upon a time but ...

I really enjoyed this. The whole time I was reading this, I could see everything you described in my mind. I also liked how you described all of the emotions ...

I don't usually explain my poetry when I share it, but this particular one is something different. I'm taking a creative writing class at my school because I love writing ...

It's a strange thing, this silly attraction. I didn't expect this sudden impact. My heart is having a violent contraction. I didn't have time for a proper reaction. It was ...

CHAPTER TWENTY Isaac answered the door with such swiftness that it caught me off guard. His smile was wide [s]in[/s] on his face, his voice clear. “Hello? Can I help—” ...

I didn't read any of the previous reviews, so if I repeat anything, I apologize. Allrighty then, this is chapter twenty. This is where the main plot is revealed, where ...

I personally think that this was really good. Short, yes, but good. I liked the way your MC described everything. >.> I have a lot of problems with descriptions and ...

This is good. I didn't really notice much wrong. Just a few little errors that are easily made while writing. Nothing too harmful. Those will be in the attachment. Anyway, ...

Sorry it took me so long to review this for you. I really apologize. I've been working a lot. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. Honestly, I'm still as hooked now ...

This was cool. I liked it. But I was a little disappointed when it didn't go into much more detail. Why doesn't she want to marry Wesley? Why do her ...

This was amazing! I'm waiting for the next chapter. I really can't wait to hear more about Isaac. I would have posted an actual review, but lucyy covered most of ...

I don't have any questions this time. =) Yay me! And I can't really find anything I don't like about it, either. So... the only thing left to say is: ...

What I didn't like about the chapter: 1) It doesn't start off where the last one ended. I want to know more about what happens after he promises he'll never ...