Sura

Salut! I'm a band geek too! I play the oboe for concert and trumpet for marching. : D AND HOMG. MOULIN ROUGE = LOVE.

Hello! I love photography too!

Something ethereal, benevolent... It would be a cool alias for a forest warrior (especially if it was Hummingbird's Kiss.) : D Sura?

"Oh tell me why, do we build castles in the sky?" I don't know the original artist, but it's been done by various DJs: Castles in the Sky "Leave behind ...

I’m trying to hide that you hurt me I’m trying to hide that I cared. I’m trying to hide that you’ve torn me I’m trying to hide the tears For ...

That's a neat pen name. : D G'luck getting published!

I've been found out! o; TPBM secretly likes Teletubbies. >:3

Yeah, it definitely wasn't good. However, it was amusing because it was so bad. xD I had some friends over and it was like MST3K. So for me, it evened ...

Hello! I really like the story, but I agree with the previous edits on grammar, etc. : D Besides the few nit picky issues, I suggestion changing the bit at ...

Let me pass on by Don’t look at me. Don’t trail your eyes down my body Meh, this sentence doesn't transition well because it's so long. and bring them to ...

Hey! I enjoyed reading your story. You had beautiful description and I could really imagine the scenes. Especially the scene in the beginning. I like where you're going with this ...

Together are we, lives entwined Holding is me, dead weight This totally kills the flow of the first line. Fighting myself, screaming inside Love me? The monster that I am? ...

W hen he holds me close I can't help but fe e l at peace 1. Please capitalize. : D 2.Check for proper word usage/spelling. EX: 'fell' should be 'feel', ...

It's alright. There wasn't much to it on any level though. It didn't make a ton of sense either. It's nothing personal, but it reads like something an illiterate child ...

Stephen King would not approve. xD Oh well, I found the list amusing. Thanks for posting!