Sura

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Greeting, Carson! It's good to have you aboard. Feel free to message me with any questions you may have. Here are a few important things to remember here: Keep the ...

Before I do the full review, I just wanted to say that your tense is inconsistent. D: Please go back and edit to make sure you don't have any little ...

Sleep is the only place I can escape to, a place where we are in love. You hold my hand, and your mouth brushes against my light pink lips. (I'm ...

...It's pretty good. I especially liked the rhythm in the first stanza, however, it does seem to falter after that. The last line in the second stanza could be changed ...

Hi Sura! ^_^ I saw this, and I figured I'll drop by and review it. Seven hours later, just after one in the morning, Mel checked to see that everything ...

Title Edited Mod: Please do not use excessive characters and characters other than numbers and letters in your titles. *dies* I've never seen that rule before. I'm really sorry. :( ...

Hi Rosey! ^w^

That was... epic. It is by far the best thing I've read all week. Long live bulls******* and smart***ery! I don't have any criticism, and I thought the length wasn't ...

I've decided against seeking advice, thanks anyway. : D

It's really extraordinary. I have to disagree with most of the criticisms. The wording is fantastic, especially in the bit with "As those who raped the earth, and gave nothing ...

Healed I’ll be doing ((Different wording, maybe?)) fine without you [s]As usual[/s] ((I don't like that term, it's too conversational for most poetry)) it’ll [s]all[/s] get better as time goes ...

Down in the belly of this dark abyss, The darkness engulfs me Be careful with the words dark/darkness/etc, they get redundant quickly. It threatens to choke me The light is ...

Name: Sura Age: 15 Fav book && YES ONE: >_> Dragon Sword and Wind Child Fav author: >_> C.S Lewis~ although I don't agree with his ideals/politics/most religious thoughts Fav ...

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