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Hello! Consider reviewing this poem? It's currently untitled. n_n; Thanks.

Sleep is the only place I can escape to, even if the escape is only brief. (You don't need the word 'only' here, it sounds funny and "brief" should cover ...

This is exactly like Hemingway's story: "For sale: baby shoes, never worn." He manages to tell a story with as much story as anything else in less than ten words. ...

Cut t me off from the world,(Cut only has one 't'.) Change my personality. Hurt me, infest my personal life, go, take my secrets and share them. (Lines 3 and ...

Here's a poem! I'd love a crit. :3

Consider reviewing this poem? ;D

...Interesting similes. I wouldn't say that they're completely irrelevant to the subject matter, but it does come off as a bit odd. Also, I don't agree that you have to ...

Ironically, this poem about despair reads as dry and emotionless as a daily review of the stock market. I'm weak, (Boring. Also, if you are going to punctuation, this must ...

This second version definitely gives a stronger image, in my mind at least. xD I only count four syllables on the first line though. O: (Each word of the four ...

@Lumi- XD No, no, I understand what you mean. I'm not a huge fan of punctuation myself. Thank you so much for your time! @Knightley- Well thank you! I'm just ...

I have a few playlists I like to use, mainly the soundtrack from Coffee Prince. Usually, I opt for mostly instrumental pieces though.

I was really loving it up until the third stanza. The first two are very nice, though. I don't like the use of 'you' in the fourth stanza, it seems ...

Poor Lenny? D< Anyway, it was a lovely book! OP- if you haven't already read it, check out The Grapes of Wrath. :3

For the younger audience it can be a bit hard to get into, but I found it to be a satisfying read. I would definitely read it if you have ...

It's nice! It doesn't have a fantastic display of range, but it works. You could use stronger adjectives, as Jasmine said. Also, as Jasmine said, the last line is off. ...