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Great job, i really liked how it was written from a first person point of view. Also its very relate able as someone above me said. As far as corrections ...

Really nice story. Im excited to read more :D I also thought this was just another Juno knockoff but its really well done. All your mistakes were pointed out soo ...

Wow, that was good. Abuse by neglect, or that least i hope that was the message. I guess the reason i liked this as much as i did was because ...