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That's really awesome :D I wish I had a little sister! 8)

Yes, it could use a bit of fixing up in the grammar arena and it is a little rushed, but otherwise it was brilliant. Great writing and plot.

The plot of this story is really nice. The villain was a very well-constructed character. Your sentence structure could use some improvement, as Jennafina pointed out. One thing that confused ...

I loved the ending, it made me chuckle a bit. For a 10 year old, it really is good, and you'll only get better with experience :) Hope you get ...

I love both books, personally Harry Potter is my favourite, though I admit it is not always the best written (which is especially obvious in Half-Blood Prince). Eragon is my ...

I love it so far. You've got a great sense of description and detail. At this moment I can't really see anything for you to improve on that anyone else ...

It sounds awesome. I've really got to get some more points :D

Every time I log in, and then try to go into the Literary Forums, it logs me out. I don't think it happens anywhere else though.

As a matter of fact, my friends and I were all stalked. Someone kept on anonymously sending us e-mails, revealing personal facts about ourselves and threatening to take over our ...

My mother says I first started writing in grade one. Honestly I can't remember. If that is true, than I probably began writing out of pure boredom. I had a ...

I am the Dreamer of Ethica, Daphne Eveline Du Marne. Sounds pretty cool :)

I love these books! They're really good and I've read all 5 so far. My mother has also and she's even liked them. It's cool that D. J. MacHale actually ...

It was cute :) Good, too. I liked it.

It's awesome. I really like how the story is turning out. The chapters are a little short and at times it could use a little more detail. Other than that, ...

I like it. Good twist on things. Now I'm going off to read the next installment :)