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It has good detail, I was able to picture everything in my head very easily, but it needs a little more substance... I don't know exactly what, but it just ...

Ya, a lot of shows went off air for a while, but today it came back (it was a huge episode!) and it will stay on until early February, when ...

Has anyone else ever watched the NBC show, Surface? It is currently my all-time favourite show. It's about a new GIANT species of underwater creatures that are popping up everywhere ...

I like it :) It's not perfect, but it's far, far better than I could ever do, :P Good job

Lol, hilarious! Well written, too. :D

Bonjour and welcome :D

That would be good, thanks :D

I'm writing a story where a girl and her family live in the French countryside in a beautiful Villa... You know the type- big fountains and lovely draping greenery out ...

Wonderful! The flow seemed a little off... The sentances and such, but the feel was perfect.

This is exactly why I don't pay too close attention to how well some books are written, or else I'd never enjoy anything, lol :P

Yes, yes, welcome. :) This web-site is absolutely wonderful and I love it! You'll find yourself able to get around everywhere quick, I'm sure. :wink:

I'm sorry, but if that happened to me, I'd be disgusted with myself- even if it was all a big mistake. I mean, to fall for your own mother? :( ...

It has a lot of potential to become a good story and I can tell you could make it into one, but yes, it could use a bit more time. ...

I really liked it, it had a sort of poetic flow to it, but at times it was a little hard to follow and the poetic quality made it sort ...

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I loved all of the characters, especially Edmund and Lucy. Azlan (If I spelled his named incorrectly, please forgive me- I haven't read the books in ages!) ...