SunshineOrange

I agree with Niteowl on this when she says about the idea of writing a poem with the theme of friendship. While it is an althogether nice subject to write ...

Hm, I liked this I think, although I believe you could've made it a little more poetic. I don't mean in the sense of adding rhymes to it, I just ...

This was.. gooooood! Omg, it was really good! You enthused a lot of tension throughout it and you kept up that feeling of terror. At the beginning I was a ...

I pretty much stick to the same font and font size for everything I do xD I hate the change it because then I look at what I've written and ...

This is good, I liked it. I had trouble how you started a rhyming rhythm going on and then you just stopped rhyming though. You had gained such a good ...

Hm, I liked this although I couldn't quite grasp what the story was majorly about, so it didn't create much of an impact upon me. But this is probably because ...

This is really good and hard hitting too! It reminds me of the adverts that have started to come on TV here in England where people get ready for a ...

Unfortunately, they all overdose and were close to death.

He looks like Fern from Magical Miracle. Good work, although I do admit, it was hard to see how good it was because of it's size.

Unfortunately, people were confused by this complex way of saying things and they all turned mad.

It's good I'll give you that, but there are a few things that jumble it up a little. You tend to cram in those syllbles especially in stanzas two and ...

First, and this is before I have started to read the actual poem, I just want to point out the punctuational errors. You have a lack of punctuation here, which ...

Whaahey. It's GingerLizzy - if you know me then Hi! I had my hair cut for the prom, here's a nice prom photo of me!

Argh no! Sorry, I'm gonna be a bit harsh on this - which isn't what I'm usually like. You're structure is okay, if you go for that kind of stuff ...

This was actually... It stunned me because I liked it so much. I'm not a fan of those long poems, and expecially not those that are like.. rather long but ...