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Ooh, mai turn? Action Adventure! First Part of Chapter One! Thank you, mucho. -Presented with a boo-berry muffin.-

;o PennyPenguin! It's LizzyG! Review maii new Action Adventure? You're a mod now! Naiiice.

Review maii Action-Packed Adventure? I need all the help I can get. I wanna make it supahh.

Financial journalist may sound unappealing to some, but I likes it. It's basically writing about taxes, credit increases, Government increases and then the stock market. Things like that. :D

Okay, so I'm posting something that tells you all about me? I'm gonna do that weird thing, where I just pick out random information and blast it out there, because ...

London, England - 2022 Our streets are dark, even at dawn, with the shadows of death and defeat. What once used to be a thriving city now stands bare, terrorised ...

This was a very good piece of writing! You need to capitalize some letters at the beginning of each line though, and also a little punctuation wouldn't be a burden ...

Fortunately, the Government were corrupt and so over-rode this law.

Argh, it's that time of year where I just go crazy about my hair and want to do something about it. I've had it cut short, like you can see ...

I agree with Sapphire here ont he statements side of thing. You have put across some lovely points, which would make the foundations of a great poem, you just haven't ...

Oof, okay a little bit a moan from me here, because this is what I usually do under these circumstances. I have a major problem with your stucture - this ...

Hm. Anyone remember that crazy loon, GingerLizzy? Well she is back. Well.. I'm her. You get what I mean. u.u Wha-heyy! :D

I want to know you; More than I know myself, My hometown. My own body. I want to touch your fleeting skin; Feel your warmth against My icy cool. Surge ...

I agree fully with Sapphire when she talks about punctuation and your capitalizing. Just make sure you do this and it not only makes the poem easier to read, but ...

Hm, this is gonan be through the eyes of a teenager still struggling with what and who to believe, okay? So if I say I dont understand something, it may ...