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;o Breaking Dawn as in the Cullen books? I haven't read that yet, but I cant wait until it comes out over here. I thought the rest of them were ...

It's time for me to crash, boom, fall. Into your open arms, that don't seem So open anymore. It's time for me to hop, skip, fly. Away from my prison ...

Awh, I was gonna call in the favour of my reviewing your work for mine, but I dont think you'd appreciate reviewing mine? It would be very helpful! Chapter One; ...

Okai dokai. This is my review; sorry if I repeat anything that has been said in previous reviews, but I have to say I dont read them, and only read ...

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Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Hooray for short poems! I love the amount of emotion that you've crammed into such a small amount of lines and you created a nice flow that works well with ...

I second the fact that you should capitalize your "I"'s, but I think that you used the punctuation in this piece pretty well. Okay, so here's my review; Picky things; ...

Hey hey, so here's my review; Picky things. Okay, so I think the first part of your story was better than this, merely for the tension factor. In this, you ...

I'd be grateful if you could look at my action/adventure piece, Future Final. It's only the first part of the first chapter, but I want to make it perfect before ...

Hey hey. Be very greatful if you'd review the first part of my first chapter. It's an Action Story ;o . Thank you mucho.

People also often refer to others as "love" and "chuck" too. When someone says "our kid" it generally means their younger sibling. :D

Chav is in the dictionary. Look it up for the "proper" meaning. I think it's something to do with working class, but I just look at them as a bunch ...

Hey there! Time for my review; Picky things; Okay so firstly, I didn't like the structure much, 'cause it all just runs into one big block and that makes it ...

Okay okay. I want a new star ^^ Sooo, it's time for you all to post your links here and I will review them all! Oh yes, but you must.. ...