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Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, I soon found out I was bi-sexual.
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Feed Meee..
Come one! Roll up, roll up! Next please ;D
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Last letter
shocking
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Change THREE letters!!
Brakes
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Unfortunately, I found the talk of spelling boring and crashed my... bicycle.
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: looking for a fantasy romance pls
Hello there! You can happily review my fantasy fiction if you would like; I just started it today! It will be based around romance a little later on. Short chapters; ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Lynlyn's Magical Critique Emporium
I love the pictures :D Please could you review my fantasy fiction? It's quick fire chapters, nice and short; Serendipity In Hell If you want payment, just post some links ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Hai! Fantasy Fiction of mine. Just written today. Grateful for a review. Serendipity in Hell If you need anything reviewing, please just post it on my review thread!
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part one
Right, I'll just say I'm sorry if I repeat anything from what anyone else has said, but I dont particularly look at other's reviews until I've done it myself - ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Serendipity In Hell; 1
Chapter One; Demon In a world where the human race is almost extinct, those with special abilities thrive to populate the planet, free from the shadow of exposure hanging over ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: Moments
There was a moment, yesterday. Your breath caught, my stomach Twirled like a leaf in the breeze. We struggled to find the words; Fought to make it known. A muttered ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Chocoholic's Cheerful Critiques!
Ooh, please could you help me out? I'm looking for pointers and suggestions on improving my sentence structure, but I welcome any kind of adive you can give. It's an ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: First in best dressed.
Ooh, this is how we roll. -Placed her shades on.- ;) Okay, can you review my Action/Adventure please? It's Chapter one, Part one! Supahhh! Click here :D Thank you, mucho!
Sep 4, 2008
