Sunshine

I like it! It's really good! Just felt like saying that!

I knew that I meant when was writing over. ~Bliss~ Blossom and I get up and begin to follow Beau when the khaki lady suddenly yells. "Lunch!" "Why do you ...

~Lilia~ "I'm not sure." I straighten up. I knew that answer would not satisfy her. "I had a..." "A what?" she dares me. "A dream. That told me about six ...

Species: Parrot Side (against, supports or neutral to the escape plan): neutral Name: Trixie Age: 8 Years in the zoo:8 Personality: Trixie is very annoying and repeats everything someone says. ...

Whats cool about this piece is how you mix Buffy and Twilight. I love that last part! I can't find any mistakes besides Lady's! Keep on writing! (Seriously. Or I ...

~Lilia~ "I-" The old lady was slyly looking at me. I shiver. Her aura was slowly overcoming mine. She was only a slight bit off from the rest of them. ...

This sounds REALLY interesting! Can I join? Would it be wrong if I entered my charecter into all of this? Sounds like it's ok I'll just delete later if you ...

I'm still gonna say high to you even though you dissed country music *hurmphs*. Then again your awesome fae username is making me forgive you. So WELCOME!!!!! *Throws pencil shaped ...

Welcome! I'm glad you agree on my views of YWS!!!!!!! Hope you love it here (Oh you will) and hope to hear from you!

Although I think the imagery was good and the flow was fine, I think it was a baby poem. What I mean by that is to use bigger words, let ...

Books, Books, Books!! *Sighs happily* I try every sort of book so be in for a big one. -Ophelia by Lisa Klein -Maximum Ride series by James Patterson -Witch and ...

I am in everyway totally jealous. That's great! Especially since I haven't read a chapter of your novel in my life.

This. Is. absolutley. An. Adorable. Idea. I think Zoo and make the penguin cages and the meerkrats on different ends of the Zoo so every animal pretty much is involved.

Sorry for my horrible spelling. Not thinking straight. Coughing to much... ~Bliss~ I smile. So Beau was trying to be a script writer. How many different suprises did he have ...

Wow. stephene said alot but I'm here to give you some kindly pointers. - Never ask if your work is good or bad. There's always going to be a good ...