Sunshine

Here as requested! I'm afraid this will probaly be the only chapter I review. I'm not a fan of 16+ or 18+. I do admire your writing skill though! All ...

Haha looks like everyone beat me to the nitpicking! Eh, that's ok nitpickying is not my type. You have a good, strong idea but it seems very...rehearsed. It lacks emotion. ...

Yikes! I don't think there's a thing to nitpick left! 1.) I do care. You made it sound VERY interesting. Can't wait for more! 2.) :) That's all I need ...

Ok, I'm to lazy to click edit on my other 'review' so here I go! I absolutely love the dialougue you have going on here and DON"T change a thing ...

Well, I guess I'll kill Eric Sparrow 'cause I'm 'spose to be with him...I wonder why he was with Vincent? Sorry for not posting I've been with relatives...and waiting for ...

*Gives Dragonet an evil glare.* (Sighs) We can re-start this one but PLEASE let's continue the regular quest. Pweez! Well I'd prefer just continueing them both...

POST! POST! Hey and Dragonet, I believe we should just continue this quest and the other SB. Well...Maybe start over the main one... Maybe...

*Will put something totally helpful and amazing here after my brain turns up from it's vacation.*

I love you for that. Yes, Yes I can.

Are we paired via this link or paired on our own with who we want?

Yo fiction! Grammar was great and I love the direction this is going in! My only thing is that this should be longer. it seems a bit short. You need ...

~BLISS~ Beau, oh, Beau. I giggle. "I'm thinking more blue. Red just contrast with your eyes." Your oh-so amazing eyes. Crap. "Really? I'm likin' the red." "What about me?" I ...

Banned for correcting people.

Done! And I love you in a none creepish way to!

Well...Not much to nit picky here ,eh, Skinsy. *Thinks about being jealous of Skinsy's fan girls, than realizes she is one.* He. Anyway... ~The Charecters~ Will seems like a fickle ...