Sunshine

This is ,bluntly, to short. My suggestions: ~Go on with what happens with the figure. This piece could use a little more charecterization. ~ Describe the settings, it's boring without ...

Banned For u=having a poorly drawn fish avvie.

~Aura McCormik~ I walk along the borders of the camp, not really hungry. I look at each of the cabins, shining in the sun. Suddenly a girl walks from the ...

It's great DaSpetsnaz! Sounds a lot like what Spirit would do. ~Spirit Jones~ I smirk silently to myself at the boys attempts to prank the Hermes cabin. Everyone knew T.J. ...

Tell me about it funky! Still, it's amazing! ~Daemond~ I remember the first day I came to camp the FIRST first day. Alex had greeted me with a sweet smile, ...

~ Daemond~ " Uh, yeah. That's probaly a good idea." She smiles and her eyes sparkle and I remember why I liked her in the first place. She leads me ...

Amp: Please put your charecters name at the top of your post! ~ Daemond ~ Dang, it was hot out today. I yawn, stretching my arms out and looking around. ...

Banned for not being a dinasour anymore! He was cute!

That's ok Dragonette! I can't post Mondays or Wensdays usually. B-ball games. Starting! Yeah! Aura McCormik ~ Aphrodite .Monday. I yawn, stretching on my feather bed. Pushing myself up I ...

Hey guys this is amazing! Thanks for posting a satyr, Dragonette. I think we might want a few more guys though... Yes, PeterHerronGunner we are most definitley still accepting! Anyway, ...

You do cross? Cool! *Smiles and then realizes that she's supposed to be corrupting the wish.* Now you have to do it in muddy shoes and jean shorts and a ...

I'm not a horror master but I'd rather babysit ghost kids then a possesed person. Really. Would you rather meet the Big Bad wolf from little Red Riding Hood or ...

I picture you with short black hair with a pink stripe in it and dark brown eyes. Yeah...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I liked this poem a lot, especially the ending. My corrections are in green. It was the ocean It was the sea . It was their ...

Here are my other two charecters! Mazzi: Can you tell how many years Luke has been at camp please? DaSpetsnaz: Friday. Name: Daemond Vrenen Age: (11-18) 16 Parents: (Mortal and ...