Sunshine

1st thing: I WANT YOU TO STOP LYING! You should be proud of your poetry because half of the people on here would be jealous. 2nd thing: NITPICKS WITH GRAMMAR ...

I think stephene got all the nitpicks so I'll go with the flow and my personal opinion. Flow: The (can't think of word!) talking is good and flows suprisingly well ...

Um I'm a little confused with Cspr's last poat but will do what I can. ~Lilia~ "Ugh, whatever." I didn't have any time to deal with culturless idiots. Looking him ...

I like the first one and the last one. They are especially pretty in black and white. Honestly, I'm not a huge fan of the middle one. Maybe because I ...

[spoiler]This is chapter two but No.1 is short and I always love reviews! Also it is much longer than Chappie one! Link: Maryland. May 2010 The stabbing pain subsided and ...

~Daemond~ Well I felt oh so out of it. Barring my teeth I sneak along the side, hoping to get their flag. There were signficantly more demi-gods than I remember. ...

~Bliss~ Just as I was about to say something in reply to Beau's Italin accent-in a perhaps a English accent-Louis says: "You never give up," he said sadly. "Always with ...

Road and I are trying to joint leader. We WILL NOT LET THIS DIE! ~Spirit~ I tried to keep my head up but was failing miserabley. The sky was dark ...

Yeah! Is back! :D I was worried there... ~Bliss~ Poor,Poor,Poor Beau. I grinned at the back of his head. "Yikes." Beau lifts his head and gives me a sad smile. ...

I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT! Personally, I think Prarie dogs are cuter than Meerkrats but *Cowers from Skins* stil love the idea and can't wait for part two! Maybe add in ...

Hate...to...say...this...but...Brooklyn...and I.....are...out...of...it....*Chokes* Can y'all help...Maybe?

Dead or not you can still work on posting for Beau and get it back going, eh fiction!

~Kasey-Camp Half blood~ "Mom? A little help here?" *Sharks close in~ "Posiedon!" *Sharks get closer* *Suddenly a dark whole swallows her up* "Thaaaank youuuu Opheliaaaaa" What would happen if your ...

DO NOT NLET THIS DIE Y'ALL!!! PLEASE!

Um... This was really funny but how in the world did Herminoe randomly show up? Elongate this part! What kind of spells? More examples. Seems a bit short and rushed. ...