Sunpies

As someone before me pointed out, this idea of Sakura getting asked out by Sasuke has been done to death. As you are not adding anything truly original to it ...

Do you know when this passed the line into "Just Another Fanfiction"? Not only are you info-dumping on us, but you're doing it sloppily. At that point I had to ...

This is truly amazing. Your style calls to mind C.S. Lewis, especially in the scene where Aslan jumps through the door and Susan says that the light is too bright. ...

I've read this author and series more times than I can count and I think I know why your reviewers are wrong in some of their criticism (or why you ...