SunnyHeart27

Haii guys, totally new to here, would love some directions around I guess, seeing as, like usual, I'm totally lost xP Will post as soon as possible and usually on ...

That's a really, really good quality of writing. You began with a startling image which drew the reader in, well done on that. A very powerful beginning ^.^ The story ...

This was interesting :D It kept my interest, the whole way through, and as a reader I enjoyed it. One thing, there was alot of dialogue without much backup information, ...