SunnyHeart27

So the above reviewers have helpfully dealt with all the punctuation mistakes, understandable and mild enough. So let me get into the parts of the story that I liked. It ...

Hey, this reminded me more of a song than a poem actually, because it was so emotive. You used language to create a really malleable atmosphere of sadness, I adored ...

Thanks so much for the reviews guys :3 It's called "Tèa" as that is the name of the main character, it's a Yugoslavian name :) I will definitely need to ...

I thought this was super enjoyable. A few small things that the other reviewers have mentioned are right and could be improved to create a work even more readable and ...

This is really interesting, because it's so short, but it inspires so much emotion. I don't think it could be improved, it's succinct and perfect as it is. Enjoyable, intriguing ...

Spring evening, cool and deep blue, had settled, extending tentative tendrils of dusk upon the small town of Anytown. Blurred orange of sodium streetlights had begun to glow and though ...

Thank you guys for the reviews, much appreciated :) I'm going to go edit out all those insanely rambling sentences now :D And true about the characterization...hurmmmm, that will take ...

Damn, your story made me cry on my laptop. Whoops. :P Seriously though, I have never been moved by a story to this extent before, and I'd like to thank ...

No problem, I meant it :)

Wow, I like this. It felt so personal, I felt close to the protagonist. It had a really interesting point to make, and made it clearly. Description is something you ...

I really liked this. Sometimes we do need to express all the feelings we have for someone special (like he clearly is) and I think you expressed yours in a ...

This is really well-written, intriguing, has a lots of good technique. Things I enjoyed were: The metaphor, Mr. Grey, was well done. Sometimes these things turn out cliched or passe. ...

Thanks, SubjectBlue :) I'm sure I will ^.^

OMG That's hilarious! *tears of laughter* :L :L Dude, such a funny story xD Mind if I stalk your page for more LOL-arious stories?? :P Niiice work :)

“I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul.” “Even more so now,” she said, her voice reverberating where her ...