Summerless

Great job and congratulations, gadi! I love your poem :] - Summerless

I don't think rhyming is too hard but getting the right rhythm is the challenge.

I recently finished Good Enough by Paula Yoo. It was well written and it was humorous. I recommend it to everyone--especially people who are preparing for college.

I agree with ink_on_fire. The way the poem flows is part of poetry. The words chosen and the way one writes it helps the flow of the poem. But I ...

This is a nice thread. I'm glad you made it. :] My most influential poets are Walt Whitman (for the free verse), Robert Frost (for expressing hidden meanings), and William ...

That is a difficult question. I never thought of it. Poetry, though, as far as I know, is a story that has no limited form. Feelings are strongly expressed through ...

Sonnets have a rhyme scheme of: A, B, A, B, C, D, C, D, E, F, E, F, G, G. And, as you already stated you know, they consist of ...

The one about kryptonite is cute. The pencil one is amusing. The others are okay. I can see how you incorporated the actual parts from Twilight. *thumbs up* As for ...

For the pixel house I only have one thing to say. Wow. As for the creature things, I like number two, style two best out of the four. All of ...

I feel like that too, sometimes. These days I tend to get overwhelmed by my writing. I think to myself: I will never finish this. This sounds really cheesy. But ...

Try reading books that are about pain or interview someone who experienced something wretched or agonizing. Have a friend who got hit in the face with a soccer ball? Have ...

I definitely agree with deafwriter_19, although I wouldn't use Stephenie Meyer as an example. There are pretty decent writers who were younger than twenty when they published a novel, and ...

I distaste perfect characters. There is no fault in them so the reader has an easier time predicting what would happen next. There is no flaw and so the reader ...

My friend who is a decent writer uses swear words, but only for three characters in her ongoing story. I role-play with a different real-life friend and one of my ...

I so agree. I used to like saying "drowning in memories" but that grew old. I also liked saying "her hair cascaded down her back" but my friend stole that ...