Summerless

Reviewing, at least for me, it when you give feedback. Example: This poem was really confusing for me to comprehend. Omit the word "and" in the third line in stanza ...

Oh, this is a really clever idea and thread! I, too, have a hard time coming up with names--last names, specifically. But I have a bunch of first names down. ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Great job and congratulations, gadi! I love your poem :] - Summerless

I agree with Shine and Monki. Take out the whole lot of 'o-o-o' parts in the last line of the poem. Also, like my Shadow and me... said, try to ...

Picturesque? Nice word :] Thank you, ChildofEden, for the compliments and I'll work a little more on the rhythm. - Summerless

This part: This can't be my destiny Wake me up. and this part: This can't be forever Please wake me up! are really weak. Try to find a better way ...

This was okay. You used "f**k" too many times, though, so it wore off the effect. Eleven times is too much. Maybe five or six times would show the anger ...

I disagree with Flame11. The "whipping up a bottle" line sounds perfectly fine. It just means that Velma briskly pulled the bottle out, right? His clothes looked like they hadn’t ...

First off, I really loved the last line. The paper and paint brush part added a nice touch. A little bit of work is needed on the poem, though. A ...

I don't think rhyming is too hard but getting the right rhythm is the challenge.

I recently finished Good Enough by Paula Yoo. It was well written and it was humorous. I recommend it to everyone--especially people who are preparing for college.

I agree with ink_on_fire. The way the poem flows is part of poetry. The words chosen and the way one writes it helps the flow of the poem. But I ...

This is a nice thread. I'm glad you made it. :] My most influential poets are Walt Whitman (for the free verse), Robert Frost (for expressing hidden meanings), and William ...

That is a difficult question. I never thought of it. Poetry, though, as far as I know, is a story that has no limited form. Feelings are strongly expressed through ...