SummerFollies

I really like this. I love your writing style, it is very well done. I read through all the chapters you posted and I am looking forward to the next ...

I really like this. I'm really looking forward for the next chapter. As far as I could see its mistake free. It sounded like a book. It hurt like a ...

This is really interesting. I'm intrigued. Can't wait for the next chapter, I love the perspective you took on it. Faults are few and far between.

Dry leaves rustled across the avenue, paper whispers in the dark. Just out of reach from the pools of light that illuminated the skeletal trees lining the pathways. The occasional ...

I love your plot. It's epic.:) I can't wait for your next update. I'm hooked! The only advise would be to develop your characters personalities a little more. Grammar will ...