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Re: Beautiful Flower
I love the way the natural imperfections of a flower simply add to the overall beauty of nature. Not to mention the pretty little water droplets. It's not everyday you ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Through the Still Night-Prologue
I really like the potential behind this prologue and can't way for more. All the major things that I was going to go over have been mentioned time and time ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Please don't leave
I liked it's length. While yes it was short, making it much longer could have detracted from the true essence of the story. I spotted a few typos, but those ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Forgot to Say Hello
I believe that I have forgotten to say hello. If I have, hello one and all. Good news, my creativity is back for now so I shall be posting at ...
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: A Night At The Movies (April Fools!)
It was wonderful. The description and detail was superb. I could picture the whole thing without trying. The ending, while killing the suspense, brought a smile to my face on ...
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Romantic Short Story #19
Your way with the words is great. Very good imagery. Although, I prefer staying away from Adverbs as much as possible. Omit where necessary thing, ya know? There are no ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Portrait photography
I really like the lighting and the angles you choose for the pictures. The first one does look far too posed, almost unrealistic, same with the fourth/angry one. They are ...
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Paper clips and rubber bands
It was a real good song and the emotions really shine through. The words work real well. There are a few parts that seem to lack the flare that some ...
Jan 6, 2008
