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It was good, you didn't hesitate with the violence of the scene, and described it despite the brutality. two things however, maybe I lost you at some point, but I'm ...

I think this is an interesting point of view on religion. i'm not sure i follow your point, but your arguments and thought are never the less fascinating the writing ...

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thanks for the review, I'll try to fix those issues in the future. however, just for the record, I have to say that I just can't see all these flaws ...

I don't know much about African culture and stuff, but I think I know a thing or two about stories- and this one was good. the detailed description was well ...

I really liked this. there was something that reminded me of the hermit in the poem, old, wise and hard the fact it was a bit unclear only increased that ...

wait, what day is what? forget that, what day is today? now i'm really confused, but that's awesome. confusing means interesting, i'm so fascinated due to the poem right now ...

actually, me and my novel are "on a brake" in the sort term I intend to focus my writing to the things I'll publish on the site.

But I don't think you'll understand it, it's in Hebrew...

Well, to begin with, my least favorite part in the story was the apology before, you should never apologize for what you created. after my little coach talk, I can ...

actually, there isn't one answer, i went with the open ending, but only on the later parts i realized that it may seems as he is the killer, originally it ...

I'm clutching my head between my hands, the horrible headache denying me of thinking. A sickening feeling shakes me as I vomit- again, according to the little puddle already there- ...

I'm clutching my head between my hands, the horrible headache denying me of thinking. A sickening feeling shakes me as I vomit- again, according to the little puddle already there- ...

I really enjoyed your story, that said, I do intend to specify. The dialogue was rich, and seemed very believable, as well as interesting. Your character, Tiviel, was a lot ...

Hello. I'm not speaking English as a native language, which is difficult when writing. However, I have to cope with it due to the fact that in today's world, one ...