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Re: Crimson Radiance
It was a really good poem- you clearly need to have more self- confidence. I liked it because you did the real lyric poetry- you didn't only caught an emotion- ...
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Re: A Job In the Market
I liked it very much. You truly managed- in that short paragraph- to tell a story, to create a character one can relate to, and to do it all very ...
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Re: I am
It's a start- and a very respectable one at that. I might be a bit arrogant seeming in this review- but remember my main field is poetry- and I'm sure ...
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Re: Potpourri for the Heart
She's a diamond hitting light. The beautiful moon touching midnight. A gentle tree, hitting the cool summer breeze. This magnificent representation always, she leaves. A staggering loveliness, I plead
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Barbara EDITED
This is an amazing short story! the characters and descriptions are as lively as I ever seen- I honestly felt like I'm there myself. William Fischer was surprisingly easy to ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for writing 'to' instead of 'too'
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for not
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for not
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Re: Rename The User Above You
Golden5
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
Greed
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned cause I wasn't cursing- I simply stated that we will kick your grey, long eared farm animal
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
Greet
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Re: Change One Letter [2]
Treat
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned cause we're gonna KICK ASS!
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for loving cats
Aug 27, 2011
