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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Crimson Radiance

    It was a really good poem- you clearly need to have more self- confidence. I liked it because you did the real lyric poetry- you didn't only caught an emotion- ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Job In the Market

    I liked it very much. You truly managed- in that short paragraph- to tell a story, to create a character one can relate to, and to do it all very ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I am

    It's a start- and a very respectable one at that. I might be a bit arrogant seeming in this review- but remember my main field is poetry- and I'm sure ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Potpourri for the Heart

    She's a diamond hitting light. The beautiful moon touching midnight. A gentle tree, hitting the cool summer breeze. This magnificent representation always, she leaves. A staggering loveliness, I plead

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Barbara EDITED

    This is an amazing short story! the characters and descriptions are as lively as I ever seen- I honestly felt like I'm there myself. William Fischer was surprisingly easy to ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned for writing 'to' instead of 'too'

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned for not

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned for not

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rename The User Above You

    Golden5

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter [2]

    Greed

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned cause I wasn't cursing- I simply stated that we will kick your grey, long eared farm animal

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter [2]

    Greet

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Change One Letter [2]

    Treat

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned cause we're gonna KICK ASS!

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [7]

    Banned for loving cats

    Aug 27, 2011


If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more.
— Jane Austen