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"one night your window was open , so I sat on the sill and watched you try to sleep . I told you that I could fly you out of ...

Well, I feel a bit wasting my time- obviously you didn't really try. But well, I'll take a shot: Lying in an pool of water, floating in a sea of ...

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What happened to Apple? She is gone for a long time now

When she's just talking to me And it feels like she's SCREAMING IN MY EAR , It makes a tear drop from my eye , You can't really call it ...

Lovely- the mythological touch adds a lot- and I think it was an excellent poem, with a lot of meaning and depth. I enjoyed reading it, greatly. few problems: 1. ...

when I was young, I flew on a rainbow . I flew throught the sky. I flew like a bird . when I was young , the sun shone so ...

I'm sorry in advance for the short comment. First thing- I liked the message- but you could have done so much better in the poem writing. I think you could ...

Time for some nitpicks! "where to go ? what to do ? what to dream ? what to hope ? empty answers , empty hearts . I cannot see - ...

I used to think that I needed someone to love me. A strong shoulder to lean on, a warm hand to hold. But, as time goes by, I'm slowly realizing ...

In front of God I plea “Let something good happen to me!”(don't actually rhyme) My prayers have ceased somewhere on this page My hope became pieced That God above, crushed ...

The words I craft drip, distastefully, from your lips And onto the floor where they run and spread Until they are thin and meaningless rabble. I try to salvage them, ...

Lost in a sea of strangers , Silently they call my name . Hands grasping onto me - Pulling me in many directions . Soft sobs of indecision ; Love ...

Shed your skin and show me the scars that line it, In such a way as leaves us both speechless. I left the words behind with my innocence, so did ...

A picture's worth a thousand words is what they say, or so I've heard. But think of myth, of ancient scripture a word can paint a thousand pictures. "Beauty" to ...