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Re: Points
Hey, so I was wondering, why have my points been reset to 500???
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Embrace
Hey, I appreciate your comments and suggestions. Thank you very much. As for dying in your embrace being cliched.. I know what you mean, but this poem was inspired from ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Embrace
Embrace thinking of how it would feel to see you again standing in front of me all quiet and somber the feelings'd return from forced hibernation I doubt they'll evaporate, ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: Lonely Violin
Thats a really good poem. I really connected with it so well, really drawn in. Excellent job. Definately one of my favourites so far.
Apr 4, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
Good work Two scenes unfold before us gathered here, Two men shuffling forward on tired quests, Two lives which were marred by a fateful fear, Two people out to do ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Withdrawn
thanks
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Withdrawn
Withdrawn some times i find myself secluded amongst the crowd thoughts taking over my mind, of times I once had of places i've been and with people i've loved yet ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Underneath
For all the talk I read about punctuation and grammar on this forum, I feel like this one might be overly-punctuated. Not in a technical sense, but in a reading ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: The sad end
Yeah. While the points above are valid, I think its an excellent effort. On websites like this age often seems to go out the window and a 10 year old ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Will I End
Will I End tonight i find myself in my room dwelling on times now past these memories seem so never ending like these times are looping.. and fast. i cant ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: First Post
I can really relate to your first one. Some of my poems are about that locked down feeling. When all you seem to be able to do is hope, wish ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Float Away
I really like the imagery in this poem. If you let yourself connect with the words you can almost feel yourself being carried off into the sky. I myself enjoy ...
Apr 2, 2007
